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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Jo0PB
The given flowchart illustrates the process of generating electricity in a Hydroelectric power station. Overall, It is evident that Power is generated during the day when water is released from a dam, and then at night, the water is pumped back to the dam. Firstly, In the morning, water in the river flows to a high-level reservoir with the help of the dam. The water flown will pass to Hydroelectric Power Station with the help of intake. The turbines with the help of this water operates generator in order to supply power to the national grid and in the evening the water flows back to a low-level reservoir. On the other hand, In the night, by using reversible turbines the water is pumped back from a low-level reservoir to a high-level reservoir through the same intake with the help of a dam and the water remains in a high-level reservoir because the intake is closed at night.
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flowchart illustrates the process of generating electricity in a Hydroelectric
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power
station.

Overall
, It is evident that
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Power
is generated
during the day when
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water
is released
from a dam, and then at night, the
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water
is pumped
back to the dam.

Firstly
, In the morning,
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water
in the river flows to a high-level
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reservoir
with the
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help
of the dam. The
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water
flown will pass to Hydroelectric
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Power
Station with the
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help
of intake. The turbines with the
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help
of this
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water
operates generator in order to supply
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power
to the national grid and in the evening the
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water
flows back to a low-level reservoir.

On the other hand
, In the night, by using reversible turbines the
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water
is pumped
back from a low-level
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reservoir
to a high-level
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reservoir
through the same intake with the
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help
of a dam and the
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water
remains in a high-level
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reservoir
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because
the intake
is closed
at night.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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157 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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