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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. YLBbj
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in coffee production and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops. In order to sell coffee, the whole process can be summarised in 11 stages. Starting from harvesting crop to packing coffee into jars. The first phase of making coffee involves collecting the coffee beans follows by a dehydration process in which farmers must dehydrate the beans under the sunlight by placing them on the ground. The next step is roasting the dried coffee beans in the roasting machine. After the completion of roasting, the coffee beans should be cooled very quickly then it is ground to powder. To prepare coffee powder for sale, it should be mixed with hot water and strain the mixture before freezing in the fridge. The coffee powder is ground and dehydrated one more time but they use a vacuum machine for dehydration in this round. The final step is bagging the ready to use coffee powder into jars and sending it out to supermarkets and shops.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in
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production and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops.

In order to sell
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coffee
, the whole process can be
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summarised
in 11 stages. Starting from harvesting crop to packing
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coffee
into jars.

The
first
phase of making
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coffee
involves collecting the
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coffee
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beans
follows by a dehydration process in which farmers
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must
dehydrate the
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beans
under the sunlight by placing them on the ground. The
next
step is roasting the dried
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coffee
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beans
in the roasting machine. After the completion of roasting, the
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coffee
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beans
should
be cooled
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very
quickly
then it
is ground
to powder.

To prepare
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coffee
powder for sale, it should
be mixed
with hot water and strain the mixture
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before
freezing in the fridge. The
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coffee
powder
is ground
and dehydrated one more time
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but
they
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use
a vacuum machine for dehydration in this round. The final step is bagging the ready to
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use
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powder into jars and sending it out to supermarkets and shops.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

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