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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. YLBbj

The diagram illustrates the steps involved in coffee production and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops. In order to sell coffee, the whole process can be summarised in 11 stages. Starting from harvesting crop to packing coffee into jars. The first phase of making coffee involves collecting the coffee beans follows by a dehydration process in which farmers must dehydrate the beans under the sunlight by placing them on the ground. The next step is roasting the dried coffee beans in the roasting machine. After the completion of roasting, the coffee beans should be cooled very quickly then it is ground to powder. To prepare coffee powder for sale, it should be mixed with hot water and strain the mixture before freezing in the fridge. The coffee powder is ground and dehydrated one more time but they use a vacuum machine for dehydration in this round. The final step is bagging the ready to use coffee powder into jars and sending it out to supermarkets and shops.

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 production and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops.

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, the whole process can be Possible spelling mistake. 'summarised' is British English.summarized
summarised
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coffee
 into jars.

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coffee
 involves collecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
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must
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beans
 under the sunlight by placing them on the ground. The next
 step is roasting the dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
 in the roasting machine. After the completion of roasting, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
 should be cooled
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very
quickly
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but
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coffee
 powder into jars and sending it out to supermarkets and shops. 