Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. kQMO

The diagram demonstrates the operational procedure of a solar powered water pump which is used to supply water to a village. There are three main components in the system, namely; solar panel photo-voltaic cells, underground bore or well and the water storage tank. The major source of energy to the system is the sun. The first step in the process is capturing and storing solar energy in the photo-voltaic cells in the solar panel which is located directing the incident rays of the sun. The panel is mounted on a pole which is placed above the ground level. The next step is transmission of direct current from the photo-voltaic cells to the bore pump in the underground bore or well. Finally, water is pumped to the water retention tank above the ground through a pipe line fixed to the bore cap. This water remains in the tank until it is distributed for the consumption of the villagers.

The diagram demonstrates the operational procedure of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcosmic
solar
 powered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 pump which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to supply You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to a village. There are three main components in the system, namely
; You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcosmic
solar
 panel photo-voltaic cells, underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpain in the neckwimp
bore
 or well and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 storage tank.

The major source of energy to the system is the sun. The first
 step in the process is capturing and storing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcosmic
solar
 energy in the photo-voltaic cells in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcosmic
solar
 panel which is located
 directing the incident rays of the sun. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 panel is mounted
 on a pole which is placed
 above the ground level. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
next
 step is transmission of direct This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 from the photo-voltaic cells to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpain in the neckwimp
bore
 pump in the underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpain in the neckwimp
bore
 or well. Finally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 retention tank above the ground through a pipe line This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpain in the neckwimp
bore
 cap. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 remains in the tank until it is distributed
 for the consumption of the villagers. 