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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. 0KP3
The presented chart provides information about the annual expenditures on two types of phone services between 2001 and 2010. In the same way, the units in the chart are measured in dollars. Overall, the money spent on cell phones experienced a downward trend, while residential phone services experienced an upward trend. Neither of the types of phones had some fluctuations. It is noticeable that the second type of phones slightly decreased over the 10-year period, while the level of cell phones were significantly changed. Although the rate of services of residential phones initially had a higher rate, the level of mobile phone outraced it in 2006 and made up 500$. After that, the level of both types of phones was completely different in the year of 2007, whereas the cell phone amounted to 600$ and the residential phone made up 500%. Finally, the cell phone reached its lowest level and was equal to 4004 as opposed to the resident phone, which was made up to more than 700$.
The presented chart provides information about the annual expenditures on two
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types
of
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phone
services between 2001 and 2010.
In the same way
, the units in the chart
are measured
in dollars.

Overall
, the money spent on
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cell
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phones
experienced a downward trend, while residential
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phone
services experienced an upward trend. Neither of the
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types
of
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phones
had
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some
fluctuations.

It is noticeable that the second
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type
of
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phones
slightly
decreased over the 10-year period, while the
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level
of
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cell
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phones
were
significantly
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changed
. Although the rate of services of residential
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phones
initially
had a higher rate, the
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level
of mobile
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phone
outraced it in 2006 and made up
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500$
.

After that, the
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level
of both
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types
of
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phones
was completely
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different
in the year of 2007, whereas the
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cell
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phone
amounted to
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600$
and the residential
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phone
made up 500%.

Finally
, the
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cell
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phone
reached its lowest
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level
and was equal to 4004 as opposed to the resident
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phone
, which
was made
up to more than
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$700".
700$
.

IELTS academic The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

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