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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. bY7JX

This diagram illustrates the process to make some energy at home in the future. Overall, we can see that there are six steps: from steel tank to to a battery, to make some energy at home. This home energy production comes from leaves, food, scraps and water. All of it is called the steel tank. Firstly, 3/4 of this tank is filled with compost and water. This compost ferments methane gas and send it out. After that, it is transformed in methane gas and goes to the compressor. Then, the compressor sends the compressed gas to a combustion engine. From there, only the mechanical energy gets out et goes to the generator. This machine transforms this mechanical energy into electrical energy. This final energy is stored in a battery (electrical energy storage) and is finally ready to be used at home.

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