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The diagram below showa chooclate is produced

The diagram below showa chooclate is produced yNw3M
The pictures illustrate how make to chooclate production from cacoa tree. Overall it can clear see that process has 10 stages beginning with picked to cacoa fruits and ending with pressed past liquid chocolate produced. Firstly, the when the rip red pods of cacoa tree farmer collected to them by hand. It are popular growed in south America and africa, indonesia. They cut to them which take to white cocoa beans. After that is fermented a long time and then dried to it under the sunshine. Following by people sell large sacks where have to dry cocoa beans for factory. These beans go into factory before transported by train or lorry. Next, this is roasted within 350 tempiceture. Then, the shells are remove to beans by outer. Finally, the liquid chololate is pressed with inner.
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chooclate
production from
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cacoa
tree.
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it can
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clear
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that process has 10 stages beginning with picked to
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cacoa
fruits and ending with pressed past liquid chocolate produced.
Firstly
, the when the rip red pods of
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cacoa
tree farmer collected to them by hand. It
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are
popular
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growed
in
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south America
and
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africa
,
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indonesia
. They
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cut
to them which take to white cocoa
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beans
. After that
is fermented
a long time and then dried to it under the sunshine. Following by
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people
sell large sacks where
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have to
dry cocoa
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beans
for factory. These
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beans
go into factory
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before
transported by train or lorry.
Next
, this
is roasted
within 350
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tempiceture
. Then, the shells are remove to
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beans
by outer.
Finally
, the liquid
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chololate
is pressed
with inner.

IELTS academic The diagram below showa chooclate is produced

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