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Cambridge 7: Test 1: WT 1 The given table illustrates and compares the consumer expenditure of five different countries on three types of items in the year 2002.

Cambridge 7: Test 1: WT 1 The given table illustrates and compares the consumer expenditure of five different countries on three types of items in the year 2002. 7aamb
Cambridge 7: Test 1: WT 1 The given table illustrates and compares the consumer expenditure of five different countries on three types of items in the year 2002. Overall, turkey spent around half of their income for numerous purposes among the countries with highest amount for food related items. While, Sweden spent least portion of their average earnings. Interestingly, all the countries expense large amount of money for food/drinks/tobacco and least for leisure/education. Firstly, the Turkish people had the tendency to spent less than a third of their national average salary for food/drinks/tobacco while Italy and Sweden spent almost half compared to Turkey. In next, Ireland secured second position in this group with 28. 91%. Secondly, almost one in ten portions of Italian citizen’s earnings pay for the expenditure for clothing/footwear. Ireland, Turkey, Spain consumed almost same amount of their income for this category. Surprisingly, all the five countries have the same trend to use money for leisure/education which didn’t exceed 5%, among those Turkey belongs to apex (4. 35%) and Spain in bottom position with 1. 98%.
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table illustrates and compares the consumer expenditure of five
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on three types of items in the year 2002.

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around half of their income for numerous purposes among the
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amount for food related items.
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portion of their average earnings.
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expense large amount of money for food/drinks/tobacco and least for leisure/education.

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had the tendency to
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less than a third of their national average salary for food/drinks/tobacco while Italy and Sweden
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almost half compared to Turkey. In
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, Ireland secured second position in this group with 28. 91%.

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, almost one in ten portions of Italian citizen’s earnings pay for the expenditure for clothing/footwear. Ireland, Turkey, Spain consumed almost same amount of their income for this category.

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, all the five
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have the same trend to
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money for leisure/education which didn’t exceed 5%, among those Turkey belongs to apex (4. 35%) and Spain in bottom position with 1. 98%.
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IELTS academic Cambridge 7: Test 1: WT 1 The given table illustrates and compares the consumer expenditure of five different countries on three types of items in the year 2002.

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