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The diagram below show the process of grafting for vegetative propagation for commercial production of plants.

The diagram below show the process of grafting for vegetative propagation for commercial production of plants. B3lX
The given four diagrams depicts the procedure of inplant vegetative increased development for related with business production of shrub. It is clearly seen that, the first figure was red rose plant in which certain types of flowers and leaves. further, the roots are in earth soil. Secondly, demonstrate the lower part of red rose plant where one trunk in which two cuts inside the branch, one chopping for Scion of pink roses whereas, the another cut for Scion of the white rose. Furthermore, Scion of pink roses and white were fixed with the below part of the branch by using wax. After 30 days when the shrubs has growns, it has different colored flowers such as red and white.
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four diagrams depicts the procedure of
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inplant
vegetative increased development for related with business production of shrub.

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clearly
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seen
that, the
first
figure
was red
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rose
plant in which certain types of flowers and
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leaves
.
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further
, the roots are in earth soil.
Secondly
, demonstrate the lower part of red
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rose
plant where one trunk in which two
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cuts
inside the branch, one chopping for Scion of pink
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roses
whereas, the another
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cut
for Scion of the white rose.

Furthermore
, Scion of pink
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roses
and white were
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fixed
with the below part of the branch by using wax. After 30 days when the shrubs
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has
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growns
, it has
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different
colored flowers such as red and white.

IELTS academic The diagram below show the process of grafting for vegetative propagation for commercial production of plants.

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3 paragraphs
119 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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