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The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles.

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. erKA
The given line graph illustrated the release of nitrogen oxide by four different vehicled with increased speed. Overall, from the graph maximum emission of nitrogen oxide are from buses and similar in petrol car and diesel car with the speed of vehicles. According to graph, the nittogen oxide emission by diesel car, petrol car, lorries and buses. At the speed of 10kph, buses produced 40g/km nitrogen oxide as speed increased to 60 kph it decreased upto 30 g/km while, speed risef to 130kph vqst quantity of nitrogen oxide released that is 45g/km. At 10 kph, lorries produce 35g/km however, it dropped upto 17 g/km according to speed. As gain the speed of lorties it climb upto 25 g/km. Almost similar trend seen for thr petrol car and diesel car. Likewise, petrol car started at 10 g/km at the speed 10 kph it rised according to the speed. Whereas diesel car at 10 kph it produced over 5 g/km qs the speed escalate it came down upto 5 g/km than it became steady upto end.
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line graph illustrated the release of nitrogen oxide by four
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vehicled
with increased speed.

Overall
, from the graph maximum emission of nitrogen oxide are from buses and similar in
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petrol
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car
and
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diesel
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car
with the
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speed
of vehicles.

According to graph, the
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nittogen
oxide emission by
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diesel
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car
,
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petrol
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car
, lorries and buses. At the
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speed
of 10kph, buses produced 40g/km nitrogen oxide as
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speed
increased to 60 kph it decreased
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upto
30 g/km while,
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speed
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risef
to 130kph
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vqst
quantity of nitrogen oxide released
that is
45g/km. At 10 kph, lorries produce 35g/km
however
, it dropped
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upto
17 g/km according to
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speed
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gain the
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speed
of
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lorties
it
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climb
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upto
25 g/km.

Almost similar trend
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for
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and
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diesel
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car
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,
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started
at 10 g/km at the
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10 kph it
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rised
according to the
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diesel
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at 10 kph it produced over 5 g/km
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qs
the
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escalate it came down
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5 g/km than it became steady
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upto
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