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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This bar chart shows perecentage of environment pollution that couse by electricity, trasportation, and industrial across different countries during 2021. It is clear from the graph that, China has the highest rate of air pollution amoung other countries. According to what is shown, industry is the highest couse of air pollution in china and Japan. Where Australia has similar rates of causes which not execeed 20% of total pollution. Moreover, China is using the electricity generation double America, Japan, and Australia. In other hand, transportation is the highest coues of environmental pollution in America which almost 60% which is double the electricity and industrial. In addition, Japan is the less country used electricity where the electricity generation caouse around 15% of air pollution. To sum up, we could say that Chine has the worst air While Australia has the cleanest air. China should consider these couses which can be harmful for our planet.
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in America which almost 60% which is double the
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While Australia has the cleanest
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