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The diagram below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy

The first diagram illustrate the stages in the life of a lady bird, while the second diagram depicit the structure of a lady bird. Overall, There are four stages in which the lady bird goes through to become a full Adult lady bug. The lady bug is characterized with her brightful Elytra of red and black. Initially, Eggs are Layed on a leaf and it remain there for two to five days which is the first stage. After this, Larvae emerge from the eggs and continue in that form for 21days. The pupa stage begin where the larvae pupate by becoming a pupa on the backside of a leaf and this lasts for 7 days. At the end of this stage, an adult Lady bird emerges and the life cycle starts again. The Second diagram show that the lady bug has a colorful red elytra with black spot that cover the wing and the abdomen. It has a total of six legs, there on each side on the head it has eye and antenna and at the back of it head is pronotum.
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in the life of a
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lady
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bird
, while the second diagram
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depicit
the structure of a
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lady
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bird
.
Overall
, There are four
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stages
in which the
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lady
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bird
goes through to become a full Adult
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lady
bug. The
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lady
bug
is characterized
with
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her brightful
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Elytra
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, Eggs are
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on a leaf and it
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remain
there for two to five days which is the
first
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stage
. After this, Larvae emerge from the eggs and continue in that form for 21days. The pupa
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stage
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begin
where the larvae pupate by becoming a pupa on the backside of a leaf and this lasts for 7 days. At the
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end
of this
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stage
, an adult
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Lady
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bird
emerges and the life cycle
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again. The Second diagram
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that the
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bug has a colorful red
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elytra
with black spot that cover the wing and the abdomen. It has a total of six legs, there on each side on the head it has eye and antenna and at the back of
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it head
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy

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