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The diagram below represents the process for producing biodiesel

The diagram below represents the process for producing biodiesel wOWo3

The diagram below shows the cycle of producing of biodiesel. It is seen that the process have six different steps, started from using sun energy and finished by produced the carbon dioxide. To start with, there is a tiny plant grown up with sun energy, which the name is renewable source, such as rapeseed or algae. After that, the little plant proceed to be an oil and extracted to two types of product. The first type is high protein residue, it is used to feed for livestock and the second product is for continued the step. Followed by the process of making the second product to produced biodiesel product. The glycerine products is consumed in manufacture industry, such as cosmetics and food industries. The fourth steps is it becomes a renewable fuel product, it is used in gas station to fill in energy for vehicle. The last two steps are vehicles produced carbon dioxide and with the power from sun, it is return into tiny seeds.

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