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The diagram below explains the process ofmaking wood pellets, used to Iteat buildings.  Summarize* 1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

The diagram below explains the process ofmaking wood pellets, used to Iteat buildings. Summarize* 1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. WyLmW
Wood pellets manufactured by this process arc suitable for use in both pellet stoves and pellet furnaces. The provided flow chart illustrates the seven stages of the wood pellet production process, which is used as a suitable fuel in pellet stoves and kilns. The process begins with the arrival of raw material, which is Sawdust from sawmill. The next step is to hammering down this sawdust, this clogging process convert sawdust into fibers of similar length. This entire step is is carried out in a machine known as hammer mill. Following step, these fibers are then steamed, for some time. Then, a pellet machine is used which forces these dampened fibers through holes. This forcing through holes process converts fibers into pellets. As a result, the pellets are heated and the next step is to cool them down. After that, loose dust is vacuumed over these cooled pellets. Now the pellets are made and ready for packaging. They are now packed in 18-kilogram (40-pound) bags for sale purposes. development of society.
Wood
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pellets
manufactured by this
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process
arc suitable for
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use
in both
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pellet
stoves and
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pellet
furnaces.

The provided flow chart illustrates the seven stages of the wood
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pellet
production
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process
, which is
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used
as a suitable fuel in
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pellet
stoves and kilns.

The
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process
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begins
with the arrival of raw material, which is Sawdust from sawmill.
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The
next
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step
is
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to hammering
down this sawdust, this clogging
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process
convert sawdust into
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fibers
of similar length. This entire
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step
is
is carried
out in a machine known as hammer mill. Following
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step
, these
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fibers
are then steamed, for
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some
time.

Then, a
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pellet
machine is
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used
which forces these dampened
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fibers
through holes. This forcing through holes
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process
converts
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fibers
into
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pellets
.
As a result
, the
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pellets
are heated
and the
next
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step
is to cool them down. After that, loose dust
is vacuumed
over these cooled
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pellets
.
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Now
the
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pellets
are made
and ready for packaging. They are
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now
packed in 18-kilogram (40-pound) bags for sale purposes.

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of society.

IELTS academic The diagram below explains the process ofmaking wood pellets, used to Iteat buildings. Summarize* 1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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171 words
5.0
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