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124. The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the consrtruction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990

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The given map depicts the development that have taken place in a mountain area where has builded hydroelectric dam over a period of 10 years. Initially 10 years ago in 1980 this area was divided into two parts by river. The right side of the river had Irrigated land. In the East side of irrigated land were mountains whereas they also were in the south part of it. On the other left side of the river was forest and mountains also. Rare plants and animals were in architecture and structure area. Below them there were mountains. The second map shows that there have been some changes, which can be seen in the river. It has been inlarged to provide water for hydroelectric dam. And the river has changed into fishing. At the end of expanded river has built dam. The second change is electrical towers have been constracted and the village has replaced from east side of river into south-east side of hydroelectric dam. The small village from the first layout has been changed into a hotel and irraget land was removed. Overall, this area has developed into an industrial and touristic zone over of a decade.
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mountain
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area
where has
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builded
hydroelectric
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dam
over a period of 10 years.

Initially
10 years ago in 1980 this
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area
was divided
into two parts by
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river
. The right side of the
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river
had Irrigated land. In the East side of irrigated land were
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mountains
whereas they
also
were in the south part of it. On the other
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left
side of the
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river
was forest and
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mountains
also
. Rare plants and animals were in architecture and structure
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area
. Below them there were
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mountains
. The second map
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shows
that there have been
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some
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changes
, which can be
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seen
in the
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river
. It has been
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inlarged
to provide water for hydroelectric
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dam
. And the
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river
has
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changed
into fishing. At the
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end
of expanded
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river
has built
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. The second
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change
is electrical towers have been
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constracted
and the village has replaced from east side of
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river
into south-east side of hydroelectric
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dam
. The
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small
village from the
first
layout has been
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changed
into a hotel and
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irraget
land
was removed
.
Overall
, this
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area
has developed into an industrial and touristic zone over of a decade.

IELTS academic 124. The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the consrtruction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990

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