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Radio and television in UK october-december 1992

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This graphic introduce that how many people listen or see radio and TV in United Kingdom during a day. As it can be seen about increase and decrease of audience. So the graph has 12 different situations. For example high, low or medium conditions. The first line shows that the radio. At 6 to 8 a. m the pointer was growth up. Then 8 to 2 p. m the number of radio listeners decreased. Because at that time many humans will be at work. The next graph provides information about television viewer. The number of spectators was less from 6 to 4 p. m. Thats way no one will have any time to watch television. After that from 4 to 10 p. m viewers quantity increases. The reasion is that most population are at home that time. At 12 p. m to 2 a. m almost nobody watches television. Cause of this condition everyone is sleeping.
The verb 'introduce' is plural. Did you mean: "This graphic introduces"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
This graphic introduce
that how
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many
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people
listen or
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see
radio and TV
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".
in United Kingdom
during a day.

As it can be
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seen
about increase and decrease of audience.
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So
the graph has 12
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different
situations.
For example
high, low or medium conditions.

The
first
line
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shows
that the radio. At 6 to 8 a. m the pointer was growth up. Then 8 to 2 p. m the number of radio listeners decreased.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
at that time
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many
humans will be at work. The
next
graph provides information about television viewer. The number of spectators was less from 6 to 4 p. m.
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Thats
way no one will have any time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
television.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that from 4 to 10 p. m viewers quantity increases. The
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reasion
is that most population are at home that time. At 12 p. m to 2 a. m almost nobody
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watches
television. Cause of this condition everyone is sleeping.

IELTS academic Radio and television in UK october-december 1992

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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