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The diagram below explain the process of making pellets.

The diagram below explain the process of making pellets. 26MkM
The given process diagram depicts information about the manufacturing of wood pellets. This diagram comprises of 7 steps. From an overall prospective, the former step of wood pellet, is collected the sawdust arrives from sawmill; the whole process is finished at the sale of wood pallets. The given process is complex and too long. As apparent from the diagram, firstly, the sawdust is arrived from sawmill; secondly, sawdust has hammered into fibers of uniform length in a hammer mill. Thirdly, the fibers are dampened with steam. Nextly, the pellet machine has been used to pressurize fiber into holes and converting into pellets. After that, the pellets have been cooled after taking from the machine; then after, the loose dust is offed by the vacuume. Lastly, the pellets are ready for marketing; the pellets have packed into 40 ponds bag. After, these wood pellets is used for both pellet stoves and pellet furnaces.
The
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process diagram depicts information about the manufacturing of
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wood
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pellets
. This diagram
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comprises of
7 steps.

From an
overall
prospective, the former step of
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wood
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pellet
,
is collected
the sawdust arrives from sawmill; the whole process
is finished
at the sale of
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wood
pallets. The
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given
process is complex and too long.

As apparent from the diagram,
firstly
, the sawdust
is arrived
from sawmill;
secondly
, sawdust has hammered into fibers of uniform length in a hammer mill.
Thirdly
, the fibers
are dampened
with steam.
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Nextly
, the
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pellet
machine has been
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used
to pressurize fiber into holes and converting into pellets.

After that, the
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pellets
have
been cooled
after taking from the machine; then after, the loose dust
is offed
by the
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vacuume
.
Lastly
, the
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pellets
are ready for marketing; the
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pellets
have packed into 40 ponds bag. After, these
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wood
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pellets
is
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used
for both
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pellet
stoves and
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pellet
furnaces.
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IELTS academic The diagram below explain the process of making pellets.

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4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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