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Household owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011

Household owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011 DVJEp

Accommodation plays an important role in the lives of modern individuals. Depending on the occupation or financial status, one may either rent or own a household. As illusterated in the chart, we can compare the statistics about the number of rented or owned houses. I would like to start with the owned ones. We can observe a significant rise throughout the years between 1918 to 2001. Although, if you look closely, you may understand that there weren`t any significant changes between 1939 and 1953. On the contrary, the number of rented houses decreased in the same 83-year period mentioned above. Similarly, the rate somehow remained the same between 1939 and 1953. It comes to our attention that numbers have changed after 2001. As a result, chart bars grew in different directions. Interstingly, the number of two categories equaled in 1971. We learn that there are numerous factors impacting this chart, and we can probably predict the near future.

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important
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 of modern individuals. Depending on the occupation or financial status, one may either rent or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 a household. As Possible spelling mistake found.illustrated
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 in the chart, we can compare the statistics about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of rented or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
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houses
.

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start
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
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. Although, if you look closely
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changes
 between 1939 and 1953.

On the contrary
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of rented This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 decreased in the same 83-year period mentioned above. Similarly
, the rate somehow remained the same between 1939 and 1953.

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comes
 to our attention that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
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changed
 after 2001. As a result
, chart bars grew in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 directions. Possible spelling mistake found.InterestinglyInters tingly
Interstingly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of two categories equaled in 1971.

We learn that there are numerous factors impacting this chart, and we can probably
 predict the near future. 