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The diagram below discribes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram below discribes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. PxBw
The picture illustrates the working of a home smokery to get food by using fresh air and logs Overall, it is clearly seen that this process contain three simple crucial stages, in which air plays vital role for getting final outcome such as baked fish and meat. To begin with, first two stages are taken place below the ground level. In first part, fresh air pass through lid of the first chamber. This air is used for the ignition of logs put through lid of the middle chamber, where logs are burned out for generation of hot air. The pipe play imperative role to transfer this hot air from underground to ground level. Final stage has a box connected with the pipe to get hot air for making baked food at ground level. In that stage the food namely fish and meat are baked for few time untill it is ready to eat.
The picture illustrates the working of a home
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smokery
to
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get
food by using fresh
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air
and logs
Overall
, it is
clearly
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seen
that this process contain three simple crucial
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stages
, in which
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air
plays vital role for getting final outcome such as baked fish and meat. To
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begin
with,
first
two
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stages
are taken
place below the ground level. In
first
part, fresh
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air
pass through lid of the
first
chamber. This
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air
is
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used
for the ignition of logs put through lid of the middle chamber, where logs
are burned
out for generation of hot
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air
. The pipe
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play
imperative role to transfer this hot
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air
from underground to ground level. Final
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stage
has a box connected with the pipe to
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get
hot
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air
for making baked food at ground level. In that
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stage
the food
namely
fish and meat
are baked
for few time
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untill
it is ready to eat.

IELTS academic The diagram below discribes the structure of a home smokery and how it works.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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