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Given in the bar chart are figures related to how many people in different age groups received daily news in 2011.

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Given in the bar chart are figures related to how many people in different age groups received daily news in 2011. Overall, the majority of people aged 18-65+ used radio to get news every day except people aged 10-17s, while Microblogging was the least used to get daily news. The people aged 18-65+ who used radio to get news day-by-day most, with data hovered around 85%-91% and two times higher than that in the age group 10-17s. The same ratio was seen in the rate of the population aged 10-17s to 65+ using Microblogging to get the daily news, which was 20% to 10%. Meanwhile, around 15-25% were the percentage of their 18-64-year-old counterparts. The proportion of the population aged 10-17s and 18-29s using Social networking mirrored each other, with 80% and more than double their 50-64-year-old counterparts. Meanwhile, this figure in people aged 65+ was 25% and was half of the people aged 30-49s.
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IELTS academic Given in the bar chart are figures related to how many people in different age groups received daily news in 2011.

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