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The diagram above shows how a solar powered water pump works.Summarise key features

The diagram above shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise key features Y2QWm
The given diagram demonstrates working of a solar powered water bore to supply water to a village. The major components include a solar panel, an underground water pump and a water tank. The Solar panel consisting photovoltaic cells is mounted on a bar above the ground level facing sunlight. The photovoltaic cells absorb energy from sunlight and converts it into direct current. This DC power with the help of wire is transfered from panel to the bore pump which is submerged in an underground bore below water level. The bore pump in return pumps water to the ground level which is then moved to a water tank with the help of yhose attached on top pump. Stored water is then used to supply the village.
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diagram demonstrates working of a solar powered
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bore
to supply
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water
to a village. The major components include a solar panel, an underground
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water
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pump
and a
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water
tank.

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Solar panel consisting photovoltaic cells
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on a bar above the ground level facing sunlight.
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photovoltaic cells absorb energy from sunlight and converts it into direct
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current
. This DC power with the
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help
of wire is
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transfered
from panel to the
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pump
which
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in an underground
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bore
below
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level. The
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bore
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pump
in return
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pumps
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to the ground level which is then
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moved
to a
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tank with the
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. Stored
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is then
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used
to supply the village.
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IELTS academic The diagram above shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise key features

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