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The data shows the comparison of consumer expenses on five various countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

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The data shows the comparison of consumer expenses on five various countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. The figure is given in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the spending of food, drinks and tobacco are the most among other expenditures at nearly 29% in Ireland, whereas there was 1. 98% in Spain on leisure and education which was the lowest expenses. Noticeably, there was a complete different between food, drinks and tobacco, and leisure and education. Food, drinks and tobacco was the first ranked in all countries, there was around 32% of spending in Turkey and almost 19% in Ireland. The purchasing of food, drinks and tobacco was closely in Sweden, Spain and Italy with accounted for 15. 77%, 16. 36% and 18. 80%, respectively. Conversely, leisure and business was the least on all expenditures, which is only 4. 35% in Turkey and it was also the most spending. Turkey was followed by Sweden and Italy at approximately 3. 2%. Moreover, there was a doubles less of Ireland compared with Turkey at 2. 21% and Spain was at last (1. 9%)
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