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The cost on expenditure: Breakdown of average cost per student expenditures (in dollar) for Public Education.

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A glance at the pie chart provided reveals The Cost of an Education: Deteration of Medial Cost every student expenditures (in dollar) for Public Education. Firstly, instruction is roughly two-third of all indicator, namely it is just over 60 percentage. However, instruction is 2 times more than support services. Likely, Support services' data is 35%. Finally, non-construction is 4 percent. Besides, it approximately 9 times and almost 15 times less than support services and instruction accordingly. Overall, it is evident that a huge expenditure spent for instruction
A glance at the pie chart provided reveals The Cost of an Education:
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of Medial Cost every student expenditures (in dollar) for Public Education.

Firstly
,
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instruction
is roughly two-third of all indicator,
namely
it is
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over 60 percentage.
However
,
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instruction
is 2 times more than support services. Likely, Support services' data is 35%.
Finally
, non-construction is 4 percent.
Besides
, it approximately 9 times and almost 15 times less than support services and
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instruction
accordingly
.

Overall
, it is evident that a huge expenditure spent for
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instruction

IELTS academic The cost on expenditure: Breakdown of average cost per student expenditures (in dollar) for Public Education.

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