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the contribution of various economic sectors to GDP in 2016,2017 2018

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The supplied table compares the proportion of the contribution to Gross Domestic Product from three assorted economic sectors to a certain country for three consecutive years, 2016, 2017, and 2018. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of additive from industry to GDP increased sequentially, while the percentage belongs to service sector contribution was reckoned noticeably decrease in the period between 2016 to 2018. By contrast, it is intriguing to note that the contribution of the agriculture sector by percentage to GDP hovered over the given period shown. Looking at the table in more detail, it is apparently seen that while the percentage of contribution by industry service displayed 22 in the year 2016, that recording indicated improvement as increasing 3% and 5% respectively 25 and 30, in the two years. On the contrary, if the service sector contributed more to GDP with 65% in the year 2016, that percentage showed its downward tendency as decreasing 1% and 9% respectively in the years 2017 and 2018. As is presented in the table, the agriculture sector was recorded to give the least contribution to GDP with 13% in the commencing year. Over two years it was observed gradual decrease to 11% and inconsequent upward to 15% in the years 2018.
The supplied table compares the proportion of the
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contribution
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sectors
to a certain country for three consecutive years, 2016, 2017, and 2018.

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seen
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percentage
of additive from industry to GDP increased
sequentially
, while the
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percentage
belongs to service
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sector
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contribution
was reckoned
noticeably
decrease in the period
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contribution
of the agriculture
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sector
by
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percentage
to GDP hovered over the
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period shown.

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seen
that while the
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of
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contribution
by industry service displayed 22 in the
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year
2016, that recording indicated improvement as increasing 3% and 5%
respectively
25 and 30, in the two years.
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, if the service
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sector
contributed more to GDP with 65% in the
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year
2016, that
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percentage
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showed
its downward tendency as decreasing 1% and 9%
respectively
in the years 2017 and 2018.

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in the table, the agriculture
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sector
was recorded
to give the least
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contribution
to GDP with 13% in the commencing
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year
. Over two years it
was observed
gradual decrease to 11% and
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inconsequent
upward to 15% in the years 2018.
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