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The contrast diagrams illustrate the development proceeded in the coastal region of Seville over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

The contrast diagrams illustrate the development proceeded in the coastal region of Seville over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010. j5PPX
Overall, it is apparent that the village is completely renovated by enhancing facilities and infrastructure. The permanent houses, Golf course and Retirement village is constructed. The major changes are discussed below. To begin with, in the northside of the seaville, the cottages were renovated into permanent houses for the residents and Woodland is converted into Golf course. Moreover, boat club has been set on the west of the river bank. However, a new retirement village has been established to the left of river which was followed by the roads. Furthermore, the cottages for the vacations were shifted towards southeast of the village from northside of town. Meanwhile, sand dunes and tea stall was developed into restaurant and a hotel in 2010. At last, the view of the location was whollely modernized with advanced facilities within thirty years of period.
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, it is apparent that the
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village
is completely renovated by enhancing facilities and infrastructure. The permanent
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houses
, Golf course and Retirement
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village
is constructed
. The major
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changes
are discussed
below.

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begin
with, in the
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northside
of the
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seaville
, the cottages
were renovated
into permanent
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houses
for the residents and Woodland
is converted
into Golf course.
Moreover
, boat club has
been set
on the west of the river bank.
However
, a new retirement
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village
has
been established
to the
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left
of river which
was followed
by the roads.

Furthermore
, the cottages for the vacations
were shifted
towards southeast of the
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village
from
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northside
of town. Meanwhile, sand dunes and tea stall
was developed
into restaurant and a hotel in 2010. At last, the view of the location was
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whollely
modernized with advanced facilities within thirty years of period.
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IELTS academic The contrast diagrams illustrate the development proceeded in the coastal region of Seville over the period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

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