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The bar chart represents the total number of trips taken to travel back and forth from school in a country using various types of transport in the years 1990 and 2010.

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The bar chart represents the total number of trips taken to travel back and forth from school in a country using various types of transport in the years 1990 and 2010. Overall, the charts show that at the beginning of the period has outnumbered most of the transport, for each transport the difference was less but there is a notable exception of cycling, where the children take it most often than in the latter year. Regarding the modes of transport in the year 1990 that were popularly used by the children are walking where it was above 12 million trips and taking the bus is the next popular transport which is less than 8 million trips to school. The least attractive mode of transport used by children is the car with three-fold lesser than walking to school in a year. In the year 2010, the
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in the years 1990 and 2010.

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that at the beginning of the period has outnumbered most of the
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, for each
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the difference was less
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cycling, where the children take it most
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than in the latter year.

Regarding the modes of
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in the year 1990 that were
popularly
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used
by the children are walking where it was above 12 million trips and taking the bus is the
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which is less than 8 million trips to school. The least attractive mode of
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by children is the car with three-fold lesser than walking to school in a year.

In the year 2010, the
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IELTS academic The bar chart represents the total number of trips taken to travel back and forth from school in a country using various types of transport in the years 1990 and 2010.

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