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the graph shows the spending on books in four countries from 1995 to 2005

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Intro: The line graph displays the amount of money spent on books in four different Europen countries namely: Germany, France, Italy, Austria over a period of 10 years, starting from 1995. Overview: Overall, what stands out from the line chart is that the four countries all tend to increase significantly over the course of the process. Moreover, the figure for Germany was highest Body 1: In 1980, Germany had the highest income of 80 million of Dollars, while Austria had the lowest income of the whole process at 30 million of Dollars. The period from 1995 to 2005, Germany reach a peak 90 million of Dollas in 1999, then tended to fluctuate and ended in 2005 with an income of 98 million of Dollars. Austria tended to fluctuate slightly throughout the process, before ending at 61 million of Dollars in 2005. Body2: In 1980, France had the most stable income and tended to fluctuate slightly before ending in 2005 at 67 million of Dollas. Italy also tended to fluctuate but was lower and ended up only 61 million of Dollars in 2005
Intro: The line graph displays the amount of money spent on books in four
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Europen
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: Germany, France, Italy, Austria over a period of 10 years, starting from 1995.

Overview:
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, what stands out from the line chart is that the four countries all tend to increase
significantly
over the course of the process.
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, the figure for Germany was
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Body 1: In 1980, Germany had the highest
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Dollars
, while Austria had the lowest
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income
of the whole process at 30
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million
of
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Dollars
. The period from 1995 to 2005, Germany
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a peak 90
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Dollas
in 1999, then
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and ended in 2005 with an
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income
of 98
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. Austria
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ending at 61
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in 2005.

Body2: In 1980, France had the most stable
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ending in 2005 at 67
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. Italy
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