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The table below shows the proportion of people who were asked which communication skills were essential in their jobs between 1997 and 2006.

The table below shows the proportion of people who were asked which communication skills were essential in their jobs between 1997 and 2006. 2lQro
The table below shows the proportion of people who were asked which communication skills were essential in their jobs between 1997 and 2006. About external communication skills, dealing with people skill was the highest, accounting for 60% in 1997. The skill was followed by advising or caring for customers or clients skill and knowldge of particular products or services skill which made up 36% and 35% respectively. The skill considered to be least important was selling a product of service. It was even lower than half of percentage of the the most essential skill. Compared to the 1997 figure, all of 2006 skills considerably increased by about 5%, exception for selling skill which decreased from 24% to 21%. However, the ranking of these external skills didn't changed. About internal communications skills, the most popular skill was listening carefully to colleagues which occupied 38% in 1997. Two skills which ranked after the first one were instructing or trainning people skill and analysing problems together with others. Top 3 of least neccessary skills were persuading or influencing others skill planning the activities of others skill and making speeches or presentations skill. After 9 years, there were no change in ranking and all these internal skills were increased dramatically apart from planning skill which only rose 1%. In particular, the highest skill surged quickly by 9%, from 38% to 27% and five others grew by about 5%. To sum up, it was clear that there was an upward trend in all of the skills. However, the external communication skills were still higher than the internal commnication ones.
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were essential in their jobs between 1997 and 2006.

About external
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skills
, dealing with
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people
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was the highest, accounting for 60% in 1997. The
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skill
was followed
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skill
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which made up 36% and 35%
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considered to be least
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was selling a product of service. It was even lower than half of percentage of
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. Compared to the 1997 figure, all of 2006
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increased by about 5%, exception for selling
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which decreased from 24% to 21%.
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About internal communications
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, the most popular
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was listening
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trainning
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problems together with others. Top 3 of least
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neccessary
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were persuading or influencing others
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planning the activities of others
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and making speeches or presentations
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. After 9 years, there were no
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