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The consumer dollar where it goes

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The pie chart shows where it goes of the consumer dollar Overall, it can be seen from this pie graph good, drink and tobacco is more big It can be seen from pie chart is that good, drink and tobacco is more biggest from others. People need food and drink. They are useful for humans but tobacco isn't useful for nature and people. They are 23 percent in pie chart. Household and housing was 15 percent in pie chart. They are useful for people and masters. We seen this graph transport was 13 percent. It can be seen from pie chart medical care was 13 percent in chart. Medical care is useful to people. Clothes, jewelry was 8 percent. I think 8 percent is enough for clothes but 13 percent isn't enough for medical care. Recreation was 7 percent, and business was 5 percent in chart. Education was 2 percent but this number isn't enough to education. Personal care, foreign travel and religion, charity was a percent in chart
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where it goes of the consumer dollar

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. Household and housing was 15
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. They are
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this graph transport was 13 percent.

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. Education was 2
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IELTS academic The consumer dollar where it goes

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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