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the components of GDP in the Uk FROM 1992 to 2000

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The bar chart compares the component parts of GDP in the UK's IT and Service industrial sectors during the eight-year period from 1992 to 2000. Overall, throghout the whole period IT industry outweighed Service industry. The biggest gap was shown in 2000, whereas the smallest was in 1996. Still, despite producing less than former, letter one represented a significant presence in almost all years. The total amount of production of IT industry had been increasing year by year, begining in 1992 where there was the smallest proportion (slightly more than 6%). Hovewer the ratio almost doubled in 1998 (precisely 12%). Its highest peak was in 2000 (above 14%). The pattern was similarly one-sided for Service industry. In 1992 it held the least amount of all the production (4% precisely), a little bit more products had been revealed in 1994 (slightly more than 6%), and in 2000 the percentage peaked its highest point (over 8%).
The bar chart compares the component parts of GDP in the UK's IT and Service industrial sectors during the eight-year period from 1992 to 2000.

Overall
,
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throghout
the whole period IT
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industry
outweighed Service
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industry
. The biggest gap
was shown
in 2000, whereas the smallest was in 1996.

Still
, despite producing less than former, letter one represented a significant presence in almost all years.

The total amount of production of IT
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industry
had been increasing year by year,
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begining
in 1992 where there was the smallest proportion (
slightly
more than 6%).
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Hovewer
the ratio almost doubled in 1998 (
precisely
12%). Its highest peak was in 2000 (above 14%).

The pattern was
similarly
one-sided for Service
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industry
. In
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1992 it
held the least amount of all the production (4%
precisely
), a
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little bit
more products had
been revealed
in 1994 (
slightly
more than 6%), and in 2000 the percentage peaked its highest point (over 8%).
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