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The climograph demonstrates the average temperatures and precipitation on a monthly basis in the city of Kolkata.

The climograph demonstrates the average temperatures and precipitation on a monthly basis in the city of Kolkata. a7B67
The climograph demonstrates the average temperatures and precipitation on a monthly basis in the city of Kolkata. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the largest raindrops are in July and the least one is in December. Whereas, May has the highest temperatures, the lowest one is January. In terms of the temperatures, January records the lowest temperatures, at 200C, followed by December (about 220C), February (around 240C), and November (250C). The temperatures of Mar, October and August are about 260C, roughly 270C, and approximately 280C respectively. The temperatures of September and July are slightly higher compared to that of August, which are nearly 28. 50C and 290C respectively. April has the level of temperatures tied with that of June at 300C, while the highest temperature belongs to May, which reaches a peak at about 320C. In terms of precipitation, the rainfall of December is the least, accounting for roughly 10mm, followed by November (20mm) and January (20mm). February, March and April also record insignificant rainfall, which is not above 50mm. This figure has an enormous increase in May, October, and June, being 100mm, 150mm, and over 250mm respectively. The precipitation of July is highest, at nearly 340mm, this is higher than that of August (about 330mm) and September (around 280mm).
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demonstrates the average
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temperatures
and precipitation on a monthly basis in the city of Kolkata.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
from the graph that the largest raindrops are in July and the least one is in December. Whereas, May has the highest
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temperatures
, the lowest one is January.

In terms of the
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temperatures
, January records the lowest
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temperatures
, at 200C, followed by December (about 220C), February (around 240C), and November (250C). The
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temperatures
of Mar, October and August are about 260C, roughly 270C, and approximately 280C
respectively
. The
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temperatures
of September and July are
slightly
higher compared to that of August, which are
nearly
28. 50C and 290C
respectively
. April has the level of
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temperatures
tied with that of June at 300C, while the highest
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temperature
belongs to May, which reaches a peak at about 320C.

In terms of precipitation, the rainfall of December is the least, accounting for roughly
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10mm
, followed by November (
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20mm
) and January (
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20mm
). February, March and April
also
record insignificant rainfall, which is not above
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50mm
. This figure has an enormous increase in May, October, and June, being
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100mm
,
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150mm
, and over
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250mm
respectively
. The precipitation of July is highest, at
nearly
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340mm
, this is higher than that of August (about
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330mm
) and September (around
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280mm
).
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IELTS academic The climograph demonstrates the average temperatures and precipitation on a monthly basis in the city of Kolkata.

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