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All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.

All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism. 3WwR5
I have done data analysis via excel and in LRP Systems, which allowed me to make effective decisions in team such as savings, budget, allocation to each department and control of purchases of goods and services. I was also a key user who provided support in managing the new application at te country level, where I had to respond in time to provide good service to internal and external customers. All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.
I have done data analysis via excel and in LRP Systems, which
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effective decisions in team such as savings, budget, allocation to each department and control of
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purchases
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goods
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country level, where I had to respond in time to provide
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good
service to internal and external customers.

All this
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my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.

IELTS academic All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.

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85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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