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All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.

All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism. 3WwR5
I have done data analysis via excel and in LRP Systems, which allowed me to make effective decisions in team such as savings, budget, allocation to each department and control of purchases of goods and services. I was also a key user who provided support in managing the new application at te country level, where I had to respond in time to provide good service to internal and external customers. All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.
I have done data analysis via excel and in LRP Systems, which
allowed
me to
make
effective decisions in team such as savings, budget, allocation to each department and control of
purchases
of
goods
and services.

I was
also
a key user who provided support in managing the new application at
te
country level, where I had to respond in time to provide
good
service to internal and external customers.

All this
allowed
me to
show
my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.
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IELTS academic All this allowed me to show my sense of responsibility, my autonomy and my professionalism.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
85 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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