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Comparison between different services

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The two pie charts gives information about the housing, food, transport and other goods and service expenditures in two countries (Japan and Malaysia) in 2010. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that while Japanese people spent most in other services and goods, housing was the most preffered expenditure in Malaysia. Both countries spent the least amount of money in helath care. In terms of other services and goods, food and healthcare expenditures, two countries have similar numbers. While other goods and services is 29 in Japan, Malaysian people spent only 26 for this category. Similarly, people in Japan consumed 24 in food, this data is just over the 27 in Malaysia. Lastly, both countries accounted for the least money in health care which are 6 and 3. With regards of the other expenditures, differences between Japan and Malaysia is more evident. Japanese spent 20 on transport, which is two times more than Malaysian people. Likewise, housing in Malaysia represents 34 while people in Japan have 21 which is almost half of the Malaysians.
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in two
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(Japan
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in percentage.

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that while Japanese
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people
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most in
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and
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, housing was the most
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preffered
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in Malaysia. Both
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countries
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spent
the least amount of money in
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helath
care.

In terms of
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, food and healthcare
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, two
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have similar numbers. While
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is 29 in
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26 for this category.
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consumed 24 in food, this data is
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over the 27 in Malaysia.
Lastly
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accounted for the least money in health care which are 6 and 3.

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, differences between
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20 on transport, which is two times more than Malaysian
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have 21 which is almost half of the Malaysians.
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IELTS academic Comparison between different services

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