Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The diagram below illustrates the process of bike manufacturing. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates the process of bike manufacturing. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. jNra

The diagram illustrate information about the process of bike manufacturing. Overall, it is clear that, there are many steps involves in this process. First of all, the frame tube has being also bending. While, in the last step It has been also 28 tests complete than due to finally bike is manufacturing. From the one side, the frame tube is also bending and than in the next step the frame building has do the work cells. In addition, one this is completed and the frame machining has also started and end up with the hot - paint frame painting. Moreover, the hot paint has also been translate in engines and transmissions that. Due to the fact that oil tank work cell, shock and forks, handlebars, fender work cells all of these include. From the other side, the wheel work cell has been also started due to fuel tank work cell and fluids and mufflers and air cleaners. Moreover, it can be seen that after 28 tests complete than roller testing has the last test. Finally, the bike has been also manufacturing.

The diagram illustrate information about the process of bike manufacturing. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 steps involves in this process. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodyfabricphysiqueframeworkcagestructure
frame
 tube has being also
 bending. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, in the last step It has been also
 28 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
Use "completer" to make a comparison with this adjective.completer
complete
 than due to finally
 bike is manufacturing. From the one side, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodyfabricphysiqueframeworkcagestructure
frame
 tube is also
 bending and Did you mean "then"?then
than
 in the next
 step the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodyfabricphysiqueframeworkcagestructure
frame
 building has Use past participle here: "done".done
do
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cells
. In addition
, one this is completed
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodyfabricphysiqueframeworkcagestructure
frame
 machining has also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with the hot Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 paint You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodyfabricphysiqueframeworkcagestructure
frame
 painting. Moreover
, the hot paint has also
 been Consider using a past participle here: "translated".translated
translate
 in engines and transmissions that. Due to the fact that oil tank You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
, shock and forks, handlebars, fender You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cells
 all of these include. From the other side, the wheel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 has been also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 due to fuel tank You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 and fluids and mufflers and air cleaners. Moreover
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that after 28 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
Use "completer" to make a comparison with this adjective.completer
complete
 than roller testing has the last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. Finally
, the bike has been also
 manufacturing. 