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The diagram below illustrates the process of bike manufacturing. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates the process of bike manufacturing. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. jNra
The diagram illustrate information about the process of bike manufacturing. Overall, it is clear that, there are many steps involves in this process. First of all, the frame tube has being also bending. While, in the last step It has been also 28 tests complete than due to finally bike is manufacturing. From the one side, the frame tube is also bending and than in the next step the frame building has do the work cells. In addition, one this is completed and the frame machining has also started and end up with the hot - paint frame painting. Moreover, the hot paint has also been translate in engines and transmissions that. Due to the fact that oil tank work cell, shock and forks, handlebars, fender work cells all of these include. From the other side, the wheel work cell has been also started due to fuel tank work cell and fluids and mufflers and air cleaners. Moreover, it can be seen that after 28 tests complete than roller testing has the last test. Finally, the bike has been also manufacturing.
The diagram illustrate information about the process of bike manufacturing.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that, there are
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many
steps involves in this process.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
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frame
tube has being
also
bending.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, in the last step It has been
also
28
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
Use "completer" to make a comparison with this adjective.
complete
than due to
finally
bike is manufacturing. From the one side, the
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frame
tube is
also
bending and
Did you mean "then"?
than
in the
next
step the
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frame
building has
Use past participle here: "done".
do
the
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work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cells
.
In addition
, one this
is completed
and the
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frame
machining has
also
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started
and
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end
up with the hot
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-
paint
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frame
painting.
Moreover
, the hot paint has
also
been
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translate
in engines and transmissions that. Due to the fact that oil tank
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work
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cell
, shock and forks, handlebars, fender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cells
all of these include. From the other side, the wheel
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work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
has been
also
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started
due to fuel tank
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work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
and fluids and mufflers and air cleaners.
Moreover
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that after 28
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
Use "completer" to make a comparison with this adjective.
complete
than roller testing has the last
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
.
Finally
, the bike has been
also
manufacturing.

IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates the process of bike manufacturing. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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