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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. 279w
The graphs display that after completing graduate and postgraduate college students in the UK didn’t go to a full-time job in 2008. Overall, it is clear from the diagrams that both graduate and postgraduate student’s first choice was to go to further study and second choice was the part-time work. After complete the graduate from college most of the students joined further study which was 29, 655. However, 27, 735 graduate students joined the part-time work which was second choice and almost the same amounts of students were unemployed which was 16, 235. And a small number of students joined the voluntary work which was 3, 500. In contrast, after complete the postgraduate from college most of the students joined further study which was 2, 725 and almost the same amounts of students, which was 2, 535, were joined the part-time work. Moreover, 1, 625 students were unemployed and only 345 students were joined the voluntary work which was three-time lass than unemployment.
The graphs display that after completing
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graduate
and postgraduate college
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students
in the UK didn’t go to a full-time job in 2008.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the diagrams that both
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graduate
and postgraduate
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student’s
first
choice was to go to
further
study and second choice was the part-time work.

After complete the
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graduate
from college most of the
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students
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joined
further
study which was 29, 655.
However
, 27, 735
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graduate
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students
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joined
the part-time
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work
which was second choice and almost the same amounts of
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students
were unemployed
which was 16, 235. And a
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small
number of
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students
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joined
the voluntary
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work
which was 3, 500.

In contrast
, after complete the postgraduate from college most of the
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students
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joined
further
study which was 2, 725 and almost the same amounts of
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students
, which was 2, 535, were
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joined
the part-time
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work
.
Moreover
, 1, 625
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students
were unemployed
and
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only
345
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were
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joined
the voluntary
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work
which was three-time lass than unemployment.
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IELTS academic The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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