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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. x1E6
The 2 maps illustrate the pre-construction and pro-construction version of Paradise island in past and present. Overall, it can be seen that, the island converted a place where it is suitable for tourism industry. To initiate with, the main noticeable convertion is a demolishing of scientific research station into hotel complex with the swimming pool of its north side. Another change is the cut downing of trees and placed them with the open restaurant beside BBQ areas. Also, restaurant is connected the hotel by path. In addition, natural spring has been sourranding with facilities such as cafe on extreme north -eastern and scientific lookout area in the upper corner of island. Furthermore, the peer has been developed and the cruise ship has replaced the old boat. What is more, the swimming is now permitted at the present island next to beach.
The 2 maps illustrate the
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pre-construction
and pro-construction version of
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Paradise island
in past and present.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, the island converted a place where it is suitable for tourism industry.

To initiate with, the main noticeable
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convertion
is a demolishing of scientific research station into hotel complex with the swimming pool of its north side. Another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
downing of trees and placed them with the open restaurant beside BBQ areas.
Also
, restaurant
is connected
the hotel by path.
In addition
, natural spring has been
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sourranding
with facilities such as
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
on extreme north -eastern and scientific lookout area in the upper corner of island.

Furthermore
, the peer has
been developed
and the cruise ship has replaced the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
boat.
What is more
, the swimming is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
permitted at the present island
next
to beach.

IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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