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The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the information about the body mass proportions of the Charlestown residents of different age groups in the years 1955 and 2015. Overall, the age group 20-29 years were less prone to obesity in 2015 rather than they were in 1955. In 1955 the majority of people are in ideal weight compared to recent years in addition some of them are underweight too. To begin with, the first chart shows that in 20-29 years age group 10% to 80% of them were in ideal weight when compared to other age groups. It is worth noticing that ideal weight is following the decreasing trend as the young become old, the prob of overweigh is in upward trend from16%-18% and underweight is decreasing which id below 10% in the year 2015. the second chart depicts that, at initial age groups ideal weight is 70% which after few fluctuations decreased to 60% at 60-69 age group. Whereas underweight is steadily increasing after fluctuating at younger age groups. the ideal weight is being stable and stable with considerable increase in eveery age group in which overweight is decreasing as the age increasing.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the body mass proportions of the Charlestown residents of
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20-29 years were less prone to obesity in 2015
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10% to 80% of them were in
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2015.

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is 70% which after few fluctuations decreased to 60% at 60-69
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IELTS academic The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.

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