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The charts shows average levels of rainfall in Marley in the UK.

The charts shows average levels of rainfall in Marley in the UK. PLGgp
The bar graph describes the usual amount of rain precipitate over a year in Marley, UK. Overall, it can be clearly seen that December, September and January have the highest amount of rainfall noted in a year. However, there is a drop in rainfall in the middle of the year, yet it increases dramatically in the succeeding months. Primarily, from December to September, the number of rainfall increases from about 84 mm to approximately 94mm. The rainfall in October has an identical amount in December by about 84mm. Interestingly, the level of rainfall dramatically declines from September to May, which levels off at about 51mm. However, this trend does not last when the rain precipitate minimally rises in April (58mm) and is followed by a moderate soar in MArch by approximately 64mm. In February, the figure decreases but it is followed by a tremendous increase in January that reaches roughly 79mm.
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the usual amount of rain precipitate over a year in Marley, UK.
Overall
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clearly
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seen
that December, September and January have the highest amount of
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rainfall
noted in a year.
However
, there is a drop in
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rainfall
in the middle of the year,
yet
it increases
dramatically
in the succeeding months.
Primarily
, from December to September, the number of
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rainfall
increases from about 84 mm to approximately
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94mm
. The
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rainfall
in October has an identical amount in December by about
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84mm
.
Interestingly
, the level of
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rainfall
dramatically
declines from September to May, which levels off at about
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51mm
.
However
, this trend does not last when the rain precipitate
minimally
rises in April (
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58mm
) and
is followed
by a moderate soar in
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MArch
by approximately
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64mm
. In February, the figure decreases
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it
is followed
by a tremendous increase in January that reaches roughly
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79mm
.
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