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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart and pie chart illustrates the pineapple trading and cost to the consumer for each pineapple from top three pineapple manufacturing countries in the year 2009 and 2019. Overall, country A contributed more proportion compared to other two countries. While export costs are being less in the chart with percentage of 4%. Firstly, In 2019, Country A traded more than 10 million pineapples. Coming to country B it was approximately 5 million in the same year, In contrast, country C has very less exportation rate in the year 2019. 2009 was the year for country B to send around 6 millions pineapples to abroad, whereas other two countries are not in same ratio. Lastly, breakdown of expenses for each pineapple in 2019 categorized as 7 different types. Producer at a ratio of 5%, Export costs were being less with 4% and International transport with 12%. The percentages of Impact licenses, profit, taxes and distribution & retail was at 10%, 18%, 16%, 35% respectively.
The bar chart and pie chart illustrates the pineapple trading and cost to the consumer for each pineapple from top three pineapple manufacturing
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2009 and 2019.

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A contributed more proportion compared to other two
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. While export costs are being less in the chart with percentage of 4%.

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A traded more than 10 million pineapples. Coming to
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B it was approximately 5 million in the same
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,
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less exportation rate in the
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2019. 2009 was the
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around 6 millions pineapples to abroad, whereas other two
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are not in same ratio.

Lastly
, breakdown of expenses for each pineapple in 2019 categorized as 7
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, profit, taxes and distribution & retail was at 10%, 18%, 16%, 35%
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IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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