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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. VG8Q
The first graph illustates world pineapple exports by the top three producing coutries within two years, 2009 and 2019 and the second one gives the information about the fee that show in the pie chart for the customer received their product in 2019. Overall the first chart, the country A and country C's export amount have increase with a different gap. For the country A, the volumn raise from sighltly over 1 to 10 tones. In case of country C, the increase softly in a decade. On the other hand, country B could notice the decrise from over 4 to almost 2 tonnes Further more, the second pie give an overiew of the charge to consumer each pineapple. Generaly, the highest fee is related to distribution and retail. The following extra price such as profit, taxes, international transport, import licences which is addapted 56 percentages. Last but not least is the two lowest expense are producer and export costs, in total 9 percent.
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world pineapple exports by the top three producing
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within two years, 2009 and 2019 and the second one gives the information about the fee that
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in the pie chart for the customer received their product in 2019.

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country
A and
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C's export amount have increase with a
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different
gap. For the
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country
A, the
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raise from
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sighltly
over 1 to 10 tones. In case of
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C, the increase
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in a decade.
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,
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B could notice the
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from over 4 to almost 2 tonnes

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of the charge to consumer each pineapple.
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56 percentages. Last
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not least is the two lowest expense are producer and export costs, in total 9 percent.

IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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