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national customer expenditure

national customer expenditure EMDb

The table illustrates the proportion of expenditure of citizens from five various nations in the year 2002. In general, it can be seen that every consumer in all the five countries tended to spend more money on food, drinks and tobacco than clothing and footwear, which was then followed by leisure and education. First, Turkey was the country where citizens spent most of their money on food, drinks and tobacco (32. 14%) than any other countries which were lower than 30%. A similar trend can be observed for the spending on leisure and education, that is consumers in Turkey allocated the majority of their money in this sector (4. 35%) compared to other nations (less than 3. 50%) with the minority of consumers from Spain (1. 98%).

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 that every consumer in all the five countries tended to spend more money on food, drinks and tobacco than clothing and footwear, which was then followed by leisure and education.

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, Turkey was the country where citizens spent most of their money on food, drinks and tobacco (32. 14%) than any other countries which were lower than 30%. A similar trend can be observed
 for the spending on leisure and education, that is
 consumers in Turkey allocated the majority of their money in this sector (4. 35%) compared to other nations (less than 3. 50%) with the minority of consumers from Spain (1. 98%). 

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