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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar charts show the contribution of different sectors in the economy of Brazil in 2009 and 2019 and project their percentage for the year 2029. Overall, Finance is the highest contributor in all these years and food processing and manufacturing are the departments with major variations during the given time period. In 2009, the percentage of share from finance was 30% which showed a gradual increase to 35% in the year 2019 and is projected to show a similar trend in 2029 to reach 40%. Food processing had the minimum role in the economy with only 10% share in the year 2009. However, it has increased to 20% in the year 2019 and is expected to demonstrate a decline of 10% in 2029. On the other hand, manufacturing is estimated to contribute minimally in the year 2029. Tourism had shared a 25% burden on Brazil's economy and an estimated decrease of 5% in this share from 2019 onwards. Moreover, oil coal and gas which were sharing 25% of the economy are projected to share the same in the year 2029.
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from finance was 30% which
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a gradual increase to 35% in the
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2019 and
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a similar trend in 2029 to reach 40%. Food processing had the minimum role in the
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10%
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2009.
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2019 and is
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2029.

Tourism had shared a 25% burden on Brazil's
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and an estimated decrease of 5% in this
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from 2019 onwards.
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, oil coal and gas which were sharing 25% of the
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the same in the
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2029.

IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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