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The charts show transportations people used to go to the University

The charts show transportations people used to go to the University XyO3E

The pie charts compare the means of transportation used by people to go to a university in 2004 and 2009. Overall, it can be seen that in 2004 cars were used as a major type of transport, while in 2009 buses took the lead in carrying commuters to study. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 2004 more than a half of people commute to the university by cars, at 51% which was far more than others. However, the percentage of buses were considerably lower than that of cars, consisting 33%. The latter type of vehicle was bicycle which made up just 9% among others. Lastly, walking and train were the least used means of transports, comprising 3% and 4% in turn. With regards to the proportion of commuting types in 2009, buses were mostly used to go to university, consisting 46% rather than that in 2004. By contrast, car using decreased sharply than it was in 2004 by 23%, from 51% to 28%. The figures for bicycle riding witnessed an increase by 16%, while walking and train remained as the least used means of carriers (6% and 4%respectively) in 2009.

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