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The given line graph illustrates the changes in three distinct types of crime in the internal city over nine years period.

The given line graph illustrates the changes in three distinct types of crime in the internal city over nine years period. GLOoj
The given line graph illustrates the changes in three distinct types of crime in the internal city over nine years period. The units are measured in the number of incidents. Overall, burglary decreased significantly over time while car theft and robbery showed some fluctuations but did not decrease much. As shown in the graph, burglary was the most common crime in the city center of Newport in 2003, with about 3500 cases. Car theft was also a popular crime there this year, with roughly 2800 occurrences. Theft from a person which was categorized as the robbery was the least prevalent crime in the Newport region, occurring only about 650 times. The number of burglaries has steadily decreased over time, reaching about 1100 in 2008. The year 2008 was the year with the fewest number of crimes. Car theft and robbery, the other two forms of crime, occurred roughly 2000 and 500 times, respectively. Car theft remained the most common crime type in Newport city center over the next few years. Finally, in the year 2012, the number of car thefts in Newport was over 2800, burglaries were around 1400, and robberies were around 600.
The
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given
line graph illustrates the
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changes
in three distinct types of
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crime
in the internal city
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over
nine years period. The units
are measured
in the
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number
of incidents.

Overall
,
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burglary
decreased
significantly
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over
time while
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car
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theft
and
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robbery
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showed
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some
fluctuations
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but
did not decrease much.

As shown in the graph,
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burglary
was the most common
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crime
in the city center of Newport in 2003, with about 3500 cases.
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Car
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theft
was
also
a popular
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crime
there this
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year
, with roughly 2800 occurrences.
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Theft
from a person which
was categorized
as the
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robbery
was the least prevalent
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crime
in the Newport region, occurring
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only
about 650 times.

The
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number
of
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burglaries
has
steadily
decreased
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over
time, reaching about 1100 in 2008. The
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year
2008 was the
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year
with the fewest
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number
of
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crimes
.
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Car
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theft
and
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robbery
, the other two forms of
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crime
, occurred roughly 2000 and 500 times,
respectively
.
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Car
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theft
remained the most common
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crime
type in Newport city center
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over
the
next
few years.
Finally
, in the
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year
2012, the
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number
of
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car
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thefts
in Newport was
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over
2800,
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burglaries
were around 1400, and
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robberies
were around 600.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the changes in three distinct types of crime in the internal city over nine years period.

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