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the development of a tiny fishing center and it's surrounding are into a large European migrant resort.

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The given diagram below depict the development of a tiny fishing center and it's surrounding are into a large European migrant resort. According to the diagrams, they show since 1974 to 2004 development within 30 years. We can see huge development of fishing center to sightseer resort. In 1974 only have 12000 of population and when developed it added 80000 and 50000 visitor beds to the resort. Further woodland totally convert to the golf course and new road developed to reach to the commuter resort. Further new hotels and new building build near to the beach and also a good deal of farmland with fruits and vegetable situated in the center of the suburb in previously only olive land in that place in addition a number of attractive beach made for passenger and all the sheep's and goals remove from the center to develop the resort. To sum up all thing we can clearly see center convert to more attractive tourist resort within 30 years. It will help to continue with proper stand and get more foreign income from their resources;
The
given
diagram below depict the development of a tiny fishing center and it's surrounding are into a large European migrant resort.

According to the diagrams, they
show
since 1974 to 2004 development within 30 years. We can
see
huge development of fishing center to sightseer resort. In 1974
only
have 12000 of population and when developed it
added
80000 and 50000 visitor beds to the resort.
Further
woodland
totally
convert to the golf course and new road developed to reach to the commuter resort.

Further
new hotels and new building build near to the beach and
also
a
good
deal of farmland with fruits and vegetable situated in the center of the suburb in previously
only
olive land in that place
in addition
a number of attractive beach made for passenger and all the sheep's and goals remove from the center to develop the resort.

To sum up all thing we can
clearly
see
center convert to more attractive tourist resort within 30 years. It will
help
to continue with proper stand and
get
more foreign income from their resources;
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IELTS academic the development of a tiny fishing center and it's surrounding are into a large European migrant resort.

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6.5
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