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The charts show the value of one country exports of various products and table show the percentage change in each category.

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The chart depicts the sales of one nation export of five different goods and a table containing the percentage of changes of these goods for the period of two years which are 2015 and 2016. Overall, as per the chart, it is clearly visible that the export of Petroleum, . Engineer and Textile products were to its peak whereas a downward movement was seen in Jewelleries and Agriculture products resulted an economical growth. Firstly, in the year 2015, the sales of fuel products were 61 (b) $ which resulted an increase of 3% and reached at 62 (b) $ in the year 2016. Secondly, Textile industries revenue skyrocketed with an upward proportion of 15. 24% from 2015 to 2016. Additionally, the Engineer articles have seen a growth in their trade of 8. 5% in the year 2016. Agriculture goods resulted an economical growth whereas the turnover of Gems and Jewellery have been diven down with the margin of 5. 18% during these period of these two years.
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2016.
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revenue skyrocketed with an upward proportion of 15. 24% from 2015 to 2016.
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2016. Agriculture
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growth whereas the turnover of Gems and
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down with the margin of 5. 18% during these period of these two years.

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