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The charts show the number of people using the internet from 1995 to 2002 and Internet users in the world in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts show the number of people using the internet from 1995 to 2002 and Internet users in the world in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. 55KBD
The given graph gives an overview of changes in approximation of netizens in all around the world over a period of seven years from 1995 to 2002, while the pie chart illustrates their nationality in 2003. The units are represented by millions and percentages. Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of people who use internet dramatically and among the online users, the USA and Canada was the highest compared to Middle East at the least. In terms of estimated rate of cybercitizen, it stood at 26 m at the first of the period, 1995 and it increased to 195 m noticeably after 4 years, 1999. Nevertheless, there was a gradual amount in online servers with 451m in 2000. Furthermore, it went up constantly and reached a peak with 580 m at the end of the period, 2002. In relation to cyber consumers, the American and Canadian used the most online with nearly a half of the total with 53%. In addition, the second-highest proportion was taken by the European with totally of 24%, and then followed by the Asian and Pacific with 15%. On the contrary, the fraction of digital population from Middle East was merely 1%.
The
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given
graph gives an overview of
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changes
in approximation of netizens in all around the world over a period of seven years from 1995 to 2002, while the pie chart illustrates their nationality in 2003. The units
are represented
by millions and percentages.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the proportion of
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people
who
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use
internet
dramatically
and among the online users, the USA and Canada was the highest compared
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to Middle East
at the least.

In terms of estimated rate of
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cybercitizen
, it stood at 26 m at the
first
of the period, 1995 and it increased to 195 m
noticeably
after 4 years, 1999.
Nevertheless
, there was a gradual amount in online servers with
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451m
in 2000.
Furthermore
, it went up
constantly
and reached a peak with 580 m at the
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end
of the period, 2002.

In relation to cyber consumers, the American and Canadian
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used
the most online with
nearly
a half of the total with 53%.
In addition
, the second-highest proportion
was taken
by the European with
totally
of 24%, and then followed by the Asian and Pacific with 15%.
On the contrary
, the fraction of digital population
A determiner is probably missing here: "from the Middle East".
from Middle East
was
merely
1%.
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IELTS academic The charts show the number of people using the internet from 1995 to 2002 and Internet users in the world in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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6.0
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