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the bar chart below shows the percentages of different kinds of landfill waste in five different countries in 2010

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The chart provides information about various sorts of waste in garbage dumps in five nations, namely Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Selenia and Vatania, during 2010. Overall, it can be clearly seen that Bratistan has the highest and the lowest level of landfill waste, one of them being agricultural and another one is construction waste. In Molovia, household and construction garbage have similar percentage, being responsible for about 35% for each, whereas electronic and agricultural waste’s indexes fell one by one. Then, In Bratistan, the largest percentage belongs to agricultural waste, being at approximately 55%. There wasn’t many electronic spendings, only about 4%, which was followed by household waste with 17% and construction waste with 25%. The first three categories in Atlantis goes up in increasing order, while agricultural spendings’ figure stands at 18%. Next, in Selenia, there is a similar trend as Molovia’s, household and construction garbage are responsible for just below 30% and other two varieties drop in descending order. Lastly, same as in Atlantis, in Vatania first three sections are the ones with highest percentage, whereas agricultural waste finished on 15%.
The chart provides information about various sorts of
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waste
in garbage dumps in five nations,
namely
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Molovia
,
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Bratistan
, Atlantis,
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Selenia
and
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Vatania
, during 2010.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that
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Bratistan
has the highest and the lowest level of landfill
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waste
, one of them being
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agricultural
and another one is
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construction
waste.

In
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Molovia
, household and
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construction
garbage have similar percentage, being responsible for about 35% for each, whereas electronic and
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agricultural
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waste’s
indexes fell one by one. Then, In
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Bratistan
, the largest percentage belongs to
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agricultural
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waste
, being at approximately 55%. There wasn’t
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many
electronic
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spendings
,
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only
about 4%, which
was followed
by household
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waste
with 17% and
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construction
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waste
with 25%.

The
first
three categories in Atlantis goes up in increasing order, while
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agricultural
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spendings
’ figure stands at 18%.
Next
, in
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Selenia
, there is a similar trend as
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Molovia
’s, household and
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construction
garbage are responsible for
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just
below 30% and other two varieties drop in descending order.
Lastly
, same as in Atlantis, in
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Vatania
first
three sections are the ones with
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highest
percentage, whereas
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agricultural
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waste
finished on 15%.
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