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the charts below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in australia,canada and the united kingdom last year. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below

the charts below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in australia, canada and the united kingdom last year. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below gxrrl

Introduction The chart shows the different types of top purchases online by country. There are 3 different countries being compared, namely Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom. It can be seen that the United Kingdom had the most number of consumers purchasing online for all the items except for toys and financial services. Body First, let us take a look at the purchase on books. United Kingdom showed more consumers buying books compared to the two other countries. In fact, it was a third more than that of Australia and Canada with the United Kingdom at over 60% while both Australia and Canada only at around 40%. The same can be said for purchase on music. Consumers from United Kingdom almost doubled the number from the other countries. It was between 60% and 70% while the other two hover around 30% to 40%. The only 2 items in the exceptions are toys and financial services. Canada had more consumers than the United Kingdom, eventhough Australia was still below the United Kingdom. Both Canada and the United Kingdom had almost 20% with Canada leading a little bit more while Australia was at nearly 0%. As for financial services, the United Kingdom had the lowest number with just a bit more than 0% while the other 2 went over 10%.

Introduction

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