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diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the second diagram illustrates how the silk cloth is produced

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The first diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the second diagram illustrates how the silk cloth is produced. First, adult moth lays egg in mulberry leaf. After 10 days, the egg hatches and silkworm larva is born, and the mulberry leaf become its food. After 4-6 weeks, the silkworm larva cover itself with silk thread, and then 3-8 days later the larva is fully covered by the silk thread and they become cocoon. Finally, the moth appears from the cocoon after 16 days. Silk thread from cocoon of silkworm larva can be used to produce silk cloth. Firstly, the best cocoons are selected and then it is boiled in a water. After that, unwind the silk thread from cocoon and 300-900 meters thread can be collected from 1 cocoon. Finally, the thread can be twisted and dyed, or the twisted thread can be weaved first before dyeing it.
The
first
diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the second diagram illustrates how the
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silk
cloth
is produced
.

First
, adult moth lays egg in mulberry leaf. After 10 days, the egg hatches and silkworm larva
is born
, and the mulberry leaf become its food. After 4-6 weeks, the silkworm larva cover itself with
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silk
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thread
, and then 3-8 days later the larva is
fully
covered by the
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silk
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thread and
they become
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cocoon
.
Finally
, the moth appears from the
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cocoon
after 16 days.

Silk
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thread
from
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cocoon
of silkworm larva can be
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used
to produce
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silk
cloth.
Firstly
, the best
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cocoons
are selected
and then it
is boiled
in
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a water
. After that, unwind the
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silk
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thread
from
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cocoon
and 300-900 meters
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thread
can
be collected
from 1
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cocoon
.
Finally
, the
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thread
can
be twisted
and dyed, or the twisted
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thread
can be
Consider using a past participle here: "woven".
weaved
first
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before
dyeing it.

IELTS academic diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the second diagram illustrates how the silk cloth is produced

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151 words
6.0
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