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The charts show the information about number of people ( in million) the internet user using from 2010 and 2017.while pie chart depicts about users in world in 2018 .

The charts show the information about number of people ( in million) the internet user using from 2010 and 2017. while pie chart depicts about users in world in 2018. ApwYx
The provided line and circular chart illustrates the information about estimated number of people ( in million ) assessing the internet between 2010 and 2017. while the percentage of user in different area around the world in 2018 compared in the circular chart. Overall, it is apparent that the number of people online worldwide followed the increasing trend over the whole period. while the maximum users of Internet were from USA and Canada. whereas, minimum work from Middle East in 2018. In 2017, the proportion of people who use the internet was higher at 580 million. People who use internet increased and marked at 61 million in 2011. The maximum users of Internet were observed in 2017 accounted for 58 million. The proportion of people who used the internet increased steadily from 2014 to 2017 and the figure accounted for 195 million in 2014, 451 million in 2015 while, in 2016 it reached at 552 million. On the other hand, in terms of the most significant figure of the chart, the larger number of internet user was in USA and Canada which accounted for 53 % of the total user. There was a difference of 5% internet user between Middle East and South America. In addition, the second most largest number of internet users in Europe was marked at 24 % while Asia at 15% in 2018.
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